Zusammenfassung der Ressource
Exposure by Wilfred Owen
- Verse 1
- 'Our brains ache'
- Shows that what
happens affects all of
the soldiers
- 'merciless iced east winds that knive us'
- 'Merciless'
- lack of feeling the
wind has towards
the men
- 'iced'
- emotionally cold to the suffering
- 'knive'
- as if the wind is
physically
stabbing them
- Personnification
- 'worried by silence, sentries whisper, curious, nervous'
- s - sibilance - reminiscent of the sound of
the never-ending wind
- phrases become into words -
emphasises how scared and cold
the soldiers are, not knowing
what will happen
- 'But nothing happens'
- repeated once per stanza (x4) at the end
- adds emphasis that it
isn't just the war they
are battling against - it
is also the elements.
Doing nothing
prolongs their pain
and makes them
weaker for when they
actually fight against
people
- Verse 2
- 'Watching, we hear'
- confusion makes them
use different actions
as one
- 'mad gusts'
- uncontrollable, unpredictable
- 'Like twitching agonies of men among its brambles'
- 'twitching'
- gruesome - makes
us feel pity
- simile
- 'far off, like a dull runner of some other war'
- even though there is only one
main war, the soldiers here are
also battling against the
weather
- 'What are we doing here?'
- anti-climax - they were
supposed to be fighting,
not sitting and being
attacked by the cold
- Verse 3
- 'misery of dawn'
- another day of agony - they know
nothing will change and that they will
deal with what they've been dealing with
for the last few days
- 'melancholy army'
- sad army - more rain, wind and storms
- metaphorically the only thing the soldiers are fighting
- 'Attacks once more in ranks on
shivering ranks of grey'
- compares the rain as soldiers. The 'ranks
of grey' are the real soldiers'
- Verse 4
- 'wind's nonchalance'
- the wind not caring
- Verse 5
- 'Pale flakes with fingering stealth come feeling for our faces'
- Snow
- personifies the snow as soldiers
- 'we cringe in holes, back on forgotten
dreams, and star, snow-dazed'
- 'cringe in holes'
- as though the soldiers are
animalistic
- 'forgotten dreams'
- ambiguous
- what dreams?
- dreams of fighting in the war?
- dreams of being back at home
- 'is it that we are dying?'
- confused - what is real and what isn't?
- Verse 6
- 'slowly our ghost drag home'
- the soldiers are imagining life back at
home, and how they miss it
- 'we turn back to our dying'
- after imagining life back
at home, they 'return' to
the pain and the
battlefield
- Verse 7
- 'For God's invincible spring
out love is made afraid'
- the soldiers feel betrayed
- lost their faith in God
- 'For love of God seems dying'
- the soldiers feel broken
and abandoned
- Verse 8
- 'This frost will fasten on this
mud and us'
- They will freeze
- 'The burying
party....in
shaking grasp
- 'Pause over
half-known faces. All
their eyes are ice'
- They recognise the dead
- 'eyes are ice'
- Dead- eyes are frozen
- living- no emotion left
- The tone of the poem is one of hopelessness & despair.
- They feel like the army and God
has betrayed and abandoned them
- Weather is the
enemy in the poem
- Last line is
shorter to
emphasise
importance