Zusammenfassung der Ressource
Feedback
- 1
- The double page spread image is good and the
simplistic colours work really well.
- The image to text ratio is really good
but maybe make the title bigger to fill
the space
- Change the colour of the text at the
bottom make it bolder, maybe also change
the font under the artists name.
- 2
- If you could make any improvements it would be to
change the colour of the font underneath Emma
Hird to make it easier to read.
- 3
- clear design and
the font choice is
good for the genre
- On the cover the key titles stand
out eg the red title of the magazine
and the headline
- contents page is clean and
the use of images is relevant
to page content, the
advertisement makes it look
authentic
- design flows to inset page with bold
black font and red to clarify key
words and there is clear formatting
on the article written about Oscar.
- avoid putting words on
separate lines in the article
eg. face-book
- could have put text
over two pages
rather than just one
- 4
- you could have a quote from the
article on the full double page
image that is significant to the
content to make it stand out
- I like how your cover isn't
overwhelmed with colour it appeals
towards your target market
- I like how there is one big
focus image on the cover
which shows the
magazine is going to be in
depth about one particular
feature
- I like the play on
words on the double
page spread as it
makes the name of
the artist stay in the
readers mind.
- 5
- overall layout of contents page is
clear, the double page and cover
images are good.
- the sell lines towards the left
of the cover look too straight,
maybe change it so the weren't
directly a lined with each other
- Move the writing
underneath the
headline on the dps
up so there is less of
a white gap