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Mindmap von Samira Choudhury, aktualisiert more than 1 year ago
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Erstellt von Samira Choudhury
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Bayonet Charge
- Ted Hughes
- 'Stumbling' - Adjective,
desperate, panic, lack of control
- 'Green hedge' - Noun,
repetition, metaphor,
goal, safety, hope
- Free verse, no regular rhythm or rhyme -
Unexpected, no structure to soldier's thoughts
- 'Smacking the belly out the air' -
Personification, impact, violent, winded
- 'Running - raw' - Alliteration,
danger, panic, sore legs
- 3 stanzas - Short, happens fast
- 'He lugged a rifle numb as a smashed arm'
- Simile, unable to use, useless as a broken
arm, weighted down, doesn't help
- ''Dazzled with rifle fire' -
Bullets shining, blur to soldier
- 'Patriotic tear that had brimmed in his eye'
- Metaphor, love for country washing away
- 'In raw-seamed hot khaki, his sweat heavy' -
Repetition, uncomfortable, rough fabric rubbing,
alliteration, 'h' hard breathing, out of breath
- 'Suddenly' - Adverb,
urgency, dropped in
- Represents all
soldiers
- 'Sweating like molten iron' -
Simile, hot sweat, fatigue
- Internal conflict
- '-' - Reflecting, thinking
- 'Clockwork' - Adjective, trying to work out
why he's here, how long has he been there?
- 'In bewilderment then he almost stopped'
- Couldn't actually stop, why is he here?
- 'Statuary in mid-stride.' -
Stopped, statue, full stop, pause
- 'Jumped up in the dark and runs' - Clueless, no
clear direction, woke up in the dark, confused
- 'Was he the hand pointing that second?' - Rhetorical question,
time stopped completely, just him in that second
- 'Shot-slashed' - Alliteration,
harsh, speeds up
- 1st stanza - Action, 2nd stanza - Slows
down, thinking, longer lines
- Influenced heavily
by Wilfred Owen
- 'Yellow hare that rolled like a flame'
- Simile, nature, other victims
- 'Crawled in a threshing circle'
- Verbs, desperate
- 'King, honour, human, etcetera' - Rule of
three, doesn't matter, no time to think
- 'Its eyes standing out' -
Fear, asking for help, it,
not alive
- 'Plunged past' - Alliteration
- 'Dropped like luxuries' - All
about survival, doesn't care
- 'Alarm' - Noun, woken up
- 'Blue crackling air' -
Smoke, gun fire, sad
- 'His terror's touchy dynamite' -
Metaphor, explode at any minute
- WW1
- 'Bayonet' - Used as last resort
- Father was war Veteran
- 37 million war casualties
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