IELTS Writing Task 2: Opinion Essay 3 - A traditional house vs a modern apartment building

If I were asked where I ❌ to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building, I think, I would hesitate to answer. This question, ❌, is a controversial one. In the following paragraphs I will ❌ both these options and present my point of view.
❌, living in a modern apartment building brings many ❌. First of all, it is cheaper than living in a traditional house and paying different kinds of fees I am not familiar with. ❌, my friend, who recently bought a new house for his family, told me that it used to be much easier to live in an apartment and ❌ him when I see his bills. So, living in an apartment will definitely help me to save some money. Furthermore, since I live alone I do not need a big house with many rooms. I just need a bedroom and a living room where I can take my guests and have my working place. ❌ of living in an apartment is that I will not have to buy much cumbersome furniture in order to furnish all rooms.
❌, living in a modern apartment building can have a few disadvantages too. ❌, it can be noisy and, ❌, I will not have any privacy outside my apartment, ❌, in a pool or gym.
❌, living in a traditional house has some advantages too. For example, I can have my own pool, gym and a garden where I can relax and be alone. However, living in a house is usually more expensive and requires more time to maintain a house. For instance, I will likely have to hire someone to mow my lawn and clean my pool not to mention all household tasks inside the house.
❌, I think at this moment I would prefer to live in an apartment. It can help me save some money and allows me to spend more time studying because I will not have to do many household chores.

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