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Read the opening paragraphs from Ellen MacArthur's autobiography, Taking on the world and then complete the PEE paragraphs below to explain what we learn about her as a person through her use of language by choosing from the drop-down menus.
From the opening two paragraphs we get the impression that McArthur is only too aware of the dangers
oblivious to the dangers ( only too aware of the dangers, oblivious to the dangers ) she will face when she climbs the mast to repair the sail. We see this when she tells us that '. . . though I would be wearing a helmet it would not be difficult to break bones up there. . . '. Clearly she is taking all the precautions she can
all the risks she can ( all the precautions she can, all the risks she can ) in order to stay safe
get a buzz ( stay safe, get a buzz ) but she recognises that she is still at risk of serious injury.
she is one of the best young sailors. ( she is still at risk of serious injury., she is one of the best young sailors. ) This indicates to us that she is not some reckless adventurer,
not a very experienced sailor ( not some reckless adventurer,, not a very experienced sailor ) doing it for the thrill of an adrenaline rush
for the very first time ( for the thrill of an adrenaline rush, for the very first time ) . She comes across as very sensible and thoughtful
bold and irresponsible ( sensible and thoughtful, bold and irresponsible ) , only taking necessary
unnecessary ( necessary, unnecessary ) risks and then, only after careful consideration and
after failing to undertake any ( after careful consideration and, after failing to undertake any ) planning.
This impression of McArthur as sensible and careful
irresponsible and reckless ( sensible and careful, irresponsible and reckless ) is established in the very first paragraph where she informs us that she 'had worked through the night preparing for it. . . '. Here we get the impression that she is meticulous
careless ( meticulous, careless ) in her planning, trying to account for every eventuality
cut corners where she can ( account for every eventuality, cut corners where she can ) but realising that she can only do so much
do it very easily ( only do so much, do it very easily ) ; ultimately she is at the mercy of the elements
her own actions ( the elements, her own actions ) once she has climbed the mast.
Her awareness of the dangers she faces creates a tense
thrilling ( tense, thrilling ) atmosphere that grips the reader's attention
excites the reader ( grips the reader's attention, excites the reader ) as we are encouraged to share her feelings of fearful anticipation
reckless joy ( fearful anticipation, reckless joy ) through comments such as 'the most dangerous thing apart from falling off is to be thrown against the mast,' which make the reader almost hold their breath
shout out ( hold their breath, shout out ) in anticipation of what will happen. In this way McArthur presents herself as an ordinary person
an extraordinary person ( an ordinary person, an extraordinary person ) ; she does not arrogantly exaggerate
modestly downplay ( arrogantly exaggerate, modestly downplay ) her skill and experience as a sailor, instead she presents the situation in a way that the reader can relate
cannot relate ( can relate, cannot relate ) to and imagine themselves
can't imagine themselves ( imagine themselves, can't imagine themselves ) in her position.