Consciously crafting writing for impact

Complete the structure plan for your letter by choosing the correct option from the drop-down menus.
Remember what you learnt in the lesson regarding the structure of a letter.

Introductory sentence = reason for writing introduce yourself ask for money anecdote about charity's work( reason for writing, introduce yourself, ask for money, anecdote about charity's work )

1st paragraph = outline specifics of event give background of charity give dates, times & events list( outline specifics of event, give background of charity, give dates, times & events list )

2nd paragraph = give more details anecdote about charity's work ask for money tell them how to donate( give more details, anecdote about charity's work, ask for money, tell them how to donate )

3rd paragraph = benefits of sponsorship tell them how to sponsor you tell them how much you want what will happen if they don't sponsor( benefits of sponsorship, tell them how to sponsor you, tell them how much you want, what will happen if they don't sponsor )

Conclusion = what you want to happen tell them how much to give what happens if they don't sponsor give your contact details( what you want to happen, tell them how much to give, what happens if they don't sponsor, give your contact details )

Making the right vocabulary choices for the SPAF of the task you are doing is important in ensuring your writing has the desired effect. Complete this version of the second paragraph of the main body of the letter by choosing the vocabulary that you feel with have the desired impact on the intended audience.

Max Appeal is a Uk charity which supports families with children who have either 22q11 deletion or DiGeorge Syndrome, both of which a can cause serious major life-limiting( serious, major, life-limiting ) physical, developmental and intellectual problems for the children affected. Unlike conditions such as Autism or Down's Syndrome so little little not a lot( so little, little, not a lot ) is currently known about 22q11 deletion and DiGeorge Syndrome that it is often mis-diagnosed and parents struggle to can't have to fight to( struggle to, can't, have to fight to ) get the support they need. Like a lot of conditions such as Autrism, 22q11 deletion and DiGeorge Syndrome are spectrums a mix of combinations( spectrums, a mix of, combinations ) of symptoms. We are lucky that Luckily, Thankfully( We are lucky that, Luckily,, Thankfully ) our son is on the mild end of the spectrum and to many just seems to be a happy, friendly - if somewhat small - little boy. Sadly Unfortunately However( Sadly, Unfortunately, However ) people don't see the true impact effect consquences( impact, effect, consquences ) this condition has as, like so many affected children, it is in the details of development and cognitive functioning intellegence intellectual ability( cognitive functioning, intellegence, intellectual ability ) that our son is so badly severely seriously( badly, severely, seriously ) affected and that is why I want to raise awareness by taking part in the first ever public forthcoming public( first ever public, forthcoming, public ) fundraising event for this amazing worthy little-known( amazing, worthy, little-known ) charity. Any amount of sponsorship you can offer would do so much to help with this little known rare unusual( little known, rare, unusual ), mis-understood and often mis-diagnosed condition.