A business report

PURPOSE
As requested request requesting( requested, request, requesting ) I am submitting submitted submit( submitting, submitted, submit ) a formal proposal concerning concerns concerned( concerning, concerns, concerned ) the possible use of the Foley Theatre building by the Players Drama Company. This proposal outlines outlined outlining( outlines, outlined, outlining ) the company's plans and intentions, and our reasons for wanting to rent the building.
NEED FOR THE THEATRE
Since the Foley Theatre closed five years ago, Lansborough has lacked a suitable venue for drama productions. We are intending to make the theatre available to the theatrical groups in the area, in addition order further( addition, order, further ) to stagging performances produced by for to( by, for, to ) our company.
RENOVATION OF THE BUILDING
If Due To( If, Due, To ) our request is granted, we do not propose want like( propose, want, like ) to alter the exterior in any other way than to repair and paint it. The interior, on the other hand, would be benefited from extensive renovation. We also but so( also, but, so ) plan to install additional seating and create a further exit in order to comply with recently introduced safety regulations.
PROFITS AND PAYMENT
We expect hope wait( expect, hope, wait ) the theatre to make a profit within the first year. Since the Arts Council has agreed to give our group a sizeable gramt, subject to our finding suitable premises, sufficient founds are available to cover running costs and pay a monthly rent.
CONCLUSION
To sum conclude summarize( sum, conclude, summarize ) up, we believe that our proposed plans for improving the Foley Theatre would bring a number of benefits to Lansborough. Not only yet if( only, yet, if ) would the building be restored and improved, but also the performances would make a valuable contribution to the cultural life of the town.