Line 1+2: “nobody comes up” no one around, summer has finished, late at night.
Line 3: “steep kilometre” difficult to get there.
Line 3: “wet metalled” don’t know what it is can slip.
Line 4: “a shower passed shredding the light.” How rain affects what you see image. “Shredding” cutting aggressive rain through effect on light.
Line 5: “pouring out of its tank in the sky.” Metaphor figurative language beautiful description in light
Line 9-10: “gathers the gold against it” metaphor for sun +personification
Line 11: “glinting” reflex
Line 12: “down you go and so in it’s way does” verb
Line 13: “the sun which gets there first.” Personification
Line 14: “hesitance to speak” isolated interrupting nature if you spoke.
Line 19: “excrescent” luna después de creciente.
Line 20: “moon sponging off the last of it.” Verb shut you there personification auditory emphasises by cesura you really not effect by pause.
Line 21: “sea-floor shudders.” Personification.
Line 22: “surge-black” danger not safe isolated not many people know.
Enjambment confuses us were sentences start finish confuses the poem read on pushes us on.
Parallel beginning to end. Isolated caesura. You will know when you get “there” ambiguish end of the poem carried through end poem. Like waves don’t
know we’re they are going. You will know in the end what happens. Extended metaphor don’t know what’s going to happen. Atmosphere in light- magical mystical unusual figurative way. Mystical place we get.describing as a journey taking us through. Directing us in a second person mixing up with three omniscient mixing up.