Look at the response to a question 2 from Paper 1 in which the candidate has provided 2 direct quotations.
Although the response would have got the candidate the 2 marks on offer, the second example would have been better if it had been paraphrased using the candidates own words but retaining the meaning of the quote.
Which of the following sentence most effectively paraphrases the second quote in the picture?
Select one of the following: