The speaker is reluctant to accept their friend's fate.
"help". Tech: Verb.
Nota:
Conveys their desperation. They're in need of assistance.
"your white lips". Tech: adjective.
Nota:
The colour white connotes purity, hope, brightness and innocence. But in this sense it's in relation to illness, they're like a ghost. It tells us the person is dying.
"my dear". Tech: Repetition.
Nota:
Suggests the urgency of the person. They aren't ready and dont' want to die.
2nd Stanza
"harboured a fierce pain". Tech:
Metaphor and adjective.
Nota:
A corridor can't harbour pain, so it's a metaphor. It's probably a hospital corridor. The quote conveys how much suffering has occured there.
"harboured" usuallt means keeping something safe and protecting it. This contrasts with "fierce pain".
"frenzied prayers". Tech:
Religious language and
metaphor.
Nota:
"frenzied" portrays the desperation and fear. They're praying to Chemistry - they're hoping for a cure or treatment that works.
"hysterical, out of your
skull". Tech: adjective.
Nota:
"hysterical" suggests them being either very upset or being deranged. Alternatively they might laugh over-enthusiastically.
"out of your skull" is ambiguous. It bears similarity to the phrase 'out of your mind'. So, it's possible the patient was going mad. Subsurdising 'mind' with "skull' implies a loss of self/lack of personality and it symbolises/foreshadows the loss of life.
"skull" obviously connotes skeletons and therefore dead bodies/death in general.
"laughed, a child-man's laugh,
innocent, hysterical, out of
your skull". Tech: Listing.
Nota:
The description of his laugh descends, becoming more negative with each description.
This could symbolise decay and the change from health to illness, and then to death.
"only a
dream". Tech:
Repetition.
Nota:
The speaker can't separate reality from fiction.
"I heard myself".
Tech: Reflexive
verb.
Nota:
Like an outer-body experience.
"nuture a virus".
Tech: Metaphor.
Nota:
Look after and care for the virus. He fed it by having unsafe sex. His body's looking after the virus until it kills him.
3rd Stanza
"dream". Tech: Repetition.
Nota:
Their friend can onlt be met in thought not in reality as they have passed away.
Line breaks.
Nota:
These show that conjuring up their memories is difficult and painful.
"you look well". Tech:
Direct speech and
adjective.
Nota:
The speaker might be trying to encourage their friend here.
4th Stanza
"where there's life..." Tech:
Punctuation and incomplete cliché.
Nota:
This is an incomplete cliché because there is no hope. The ellipsis replaces hope. The friend will certainly die.
"you were long dead". Tech: Adverb and circular structure.
Nota:
This reinforces that the friend is deceased. "long" implies they've been dead for some time.
"acting" and "thumbs up".
Tech: Metaphor and verb.
Nota:
The friend is behaving as if they are well and happy. But this is a lie, they're putting on a brave face.