Turns scary.
Audience learns she
has a mental
problem.
The other characters are multirolling.
Start off as
circus machinery
(ferris wheel,
cotton candy
stall etc.)
Towards the end they become
crazy zombies who try to kill
the young girl.
At the end the girl is
suddenly lying in her
own bed in her home
screaming from the
'dream she had'. What
she doesn't know is
that the zombie-like
creatures are waiting for
her behind her bed.
First Ideas
We weren't sure how
we were going to create
the scary atmosphere.
We came up with the idea of the
circus fair because we would be able
to create a contrast with the happy
atmosphere with the giggling of
children and the scary atmosphere of
the clowns and haunted house.
We decided we could use the
movie "The Orphan" as inspiration,
using the idea of a happy young girl
who turns out to be violent and
frightening.
We decided that to
create the circus
atmosphere we bring in
the concept of Physical
Theatre.
We could act out
machinery by the noises we
could make.
To help us with this we
decided to put a
characteristic on that
piece of machinery.
E.g. Cotton
Candy would be
hyper, high
pitched, fast,
friendly.
Vocal Ideas.
To make the Zombies sound
creepy we thought that
everything they would say be
a question and that their
voices would be high pitched.
The young girl's voice
would be relativily
normal but a bit faster
and then as she began
to become scary her
voice would become low
and slow.
What wasn't working.
We wanted the machinery to
catch fire but we were not sure
how to portray fire ( we thought
that if we just flapped our arms
about it would be funny for the
audience?)
Machinery would scream and
act just like if a persons hair
caught on fire.
The zombies movements.
Needed to be a lot slower.
Target Audience
13-18 Young Adults.
Style
Non Naturalistic
What Would You Change
To start off the play, instead of going straight into the
circus scene, I would show her coming out of a mental
home. This would tell the audience that she was not a
normal girl.
The Zombies should keep chanting
the same question at the girl that
would make her angry. E.g Why did
you kill her?