“Ignorance can be dangerous.” Referring to two or three events from The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas,

1. Topic Sentence

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   • Reference to the question, Author and title
2. Preview of three ideas
   1. idea 1

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      • Idea 1- Bruno did not heed the warning of the fence. -He still went to the other side even though shmule said no
   2. Idea 2

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      • Idea 2- Bruno ignored his mother by going into the backyard of the new house. -This turned out to be a bad choise for Bruno that affects him later in the book
   3. Idea 3

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      • Idea 3- Leftenant Kotler disobeyed his oath to Hitler and the public. - This affected Leftenant Kotler  as when he explained to Brunos mother the commandant which was Brunos father was inforemed by his wife which then got leftenant Kotler revoked of his job and being sent to the front lie to be a soldier.
3. Concluding Sentence

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   • Reiterates point of View Leads into next paragraph
4. WARNING

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   • No References in topic sentence No personal reference No reference to Essay

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• Explain/ Elaborate Idea 3- Leftenant Kotler disobeyed his oath to Hitler and the public.

1. STRONG
2. Topic Sentence

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   • Refer to one of the three ideas in the introduction
3. Evidence

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   • Use quotes and evidence from the book
   1. Quotes used
4. Concluding sentence

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• Explain/ Elaborate Idea 2- Bruno ignored his mother by going into the backyard of the new house.

1. Topic sentence

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   • Refer to one of the three ideas suggested in the introduction
2. Evidence

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   • used quotes and evidence from the book This ignorence to his mother affected him really badly in the rest of this book as he then found the fence which had Shmule behind it which later had a bad affect on Bruno, It Killed Him
   1. quotes used
3. Concluding Sentence
4. STRONG

Annotations:

• Explain/ Elaborate Idea 1- Bruno did not heed the warning of the fence.

1. Topic Sentence

   Annotations:

   • Refer to one of the three ideas from the introduction
2. Evidence

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   • Use evidence from the books with quotes. Evidence to this would be Shmule warning Bruno not to come under the fence as Bruno did not know the horrors under the fence but Bruno still went under the fence and he later died from this decision
   1. Quotes used
3. Concluding sentence
4. STRONG