'It's a weary life, it is,
she said: /Doubly blank
in a woman's lot: /I wish
and I wish I were a man:/
Or, better then any
being, were not:'
‘It is a weary life’,
establishing the
theme of the poem,
the undervaluing of
women.
To reinforce it, Rossetti adds
another ‘It is’, and then
‘Doubly blank.’
So for many, life is
joyless. ‘I wish and I wish’
gives yet further
emphasis.
The last line is chilling. She is
saying that not to exist at all is
better even than being a man.
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plosive alliteration
could add to this
Were nothing at all in all the world,/
Not a body and not a soul: /Not so
much as a grain of dust /Or a drop of
water from pole to pole.
The words, starting with ‘Were nothing’ seem to twist
and turn, making little sense, other than to reinforce the
negative perspective she has of life.
Natural imagery — water and dust — are opposites, suggesting
that life for her is worthless, whatever the elements in which she
lives. Dust, particularly, has connotations of death, as in the
Anglican burial prayer, Ashes to ashes, dust to dust.
The inclusion of “not a soul” suggests a
religious element. Even if she were a soul
destined for heaven, this has no appeal; the
speaker simply wishes she did not exist.
childlike repetition of 'all'
compared to the dark
nature of the poem
anapestic
repetition
separated
but
brought
together
linking
body
and
soul
religion
emjambement
highlights
insignificance
of it
becoming
nothing
Still the world would wag on
the same,/ Still the seasons go
and come:/ Blossoms bloom as
in days of old,/ Cherries ripen
and wild bees hum.
The alliterative ‘world would
wag’ could be humorous but
not in this context. The world
is indifferent to the suffering
of women, wherever and
whoever they are.
She is saying that nothing has changed for
centuries; that the natural world would be
regenerated, whether or not she existed.
There is a hint that she is aware of
the beauty of the natural world —
the emphatic, alliterative ‘blossoms
bloom’ suggests this — but these
don’t enrich her life. She is apart
from any meaningful joy.
stereotypical nature
think it is
nice but she
is saying it
isnt
tantilising us
with the world
None would miss me in all
the world,/ How much less
would care or weep:/ I
should be nothing, while
all the rest/ Would wake
and weary and fall asleep.
The multiple negatives
continue. It is impossible
for anyone to ‘care or weep’
less about someone who
hasn’t existed; who is
‘nothing’.
'in all the world' - repetition from
stanza 2 - return to non-existance
Yet she feels she is speaking for ‘all the
rest’, and by this we may assume she
means other women. The last line is
alliterative with its repeated ‘w’s, and
tired-sounding repeated 'and’s,
forming a syndetic list.
'should' - idea that she
feels that she
deserves the outcome
desire for non-existance
Links:
Song: When I am dead my
dearest - the use of nature
compared to death and the
separation of nature and the
persona + the feeling of despair
and loss
Remember:
feeling of
despair and loss
+ the
acceptance of
death