Don't talk to me of love I've
had an earful And i get
tearful when I've downed a
drink or two. I'm one of
your talking, wounded. I'm a
hostage. I'm maroonded. But
I'm in Paris with you.
Don't- negative imperative:
man sounds aggressive and
possessive and could hint to
why his previous relationship
failed and why the current
fling he has isn't successful
earful- suggests he's had enough of love
downed a drink or two- suggest
that he has had a drink
errors in language- maroonded and talking
dead suggest that the alcohol he has drunk
has taken an influence
talking wounded- pun for war terminology of walking
wounded which is a soldier injured in battle but able to
walk around
suggests thats how he feels about himself- he was
hurt by the ending of his previous relationship but he's
still able to go to paris and have a physical relationship
I'm a hostage. I'm maroonded- suggests he feels trapped by this
situation and that he is alone in an inescapable place. Maroonded
is a play on the real word
But I'm in Paris with you- direct address also But
is a term thats used to contrast what has been
said previously, so this could be taken a s a
positive or a negative
Yes I'm angry at the way Ive been
bamboozled And resentful at the mess i've
been through. I admit i'm on the rebound
And i don't care where are WE bound. I'm in
Paris with you.
Yes- suggests that he is answering a question unknown to the
audience from the lover. Also tells us that the poem is taken in a
dramatic monologue style
bamboozled- specific word, significant, stands out, means fooled
and cheated which could suggest that the ending of his previous
relationship was down to the wife/girlfriend cheating on him or
playing him for a fool e.g. she was never going to come on the
romantic trip to France.
the word stands out and makes the reader/audience see him as a
victim for the first time
resentful- he is very angry at the way he's been treated by his previous lover
rebound- not a significant relationship and he admits this to her
i don't care where are WE bound- we see him as an uncaring
possessive man again. use of italics in WE suggests that the
woman he's with has asked him where their relationship is going
and he's basically said that there is no we and that he doesn't view
them as a couple or in a relationship--> there is no love
Do you mind if we don't go to the Louvre, If we say sod off to the
sodding Notre Dame, if we skip the Champs Elysees And remain here in
this sleazy Old hotel room Doing this and that To what and whom
Learning who you are, Learning what i am
this paragraph is indented--> its significant-->
shows stanza is different as the poet is going to
stop moaning and reveal his intentions
different form- doesn't start with Don't and also
doesn't finish with Im in Paris with you
COMPARISON- like the last line in Nettles and
Brothers or the volta in sonnet 43 it reveals a
message of the poem. Difference in structure
and form shows how important this verse is
comma- used instead of a question mark shows
that its not a question but its a demand--> reflects
his dominant, possessive and uncaring nature and
could hint to why first relationship broke up
Louvre- is a museum--> looks at past events--> he
doesn't want to go there because he doesn't want
to dwell on the past and his past relationship
Notre Dame- is a cathedral--> symbolises
marriage--> doesn't want to go there and be
reminded of his previous marriage/ plans of
marriage with girlfriend
Champs Elysees- famous street in Paris
with assorted cafes and
restaurants-->only worth visiting with
someone special
sleazy- first sexual word in poem, forced
rhyme with Elysees- the forcing of rhyme
shows that he is nervous for his sexual
intentions towards this mystery woman to
be rejected so he is trying to be
funny/cheeky---> not working so well
doing this and that- downplaying seriousness for sexual
gratification--> by referring to intimate sexual relations
as this and that he is sure to offend the reader/ the
woman he is with--> presents him again as UNCARING
to what and whom- impersonal and
insensitive--> suggests relationship is more
like a business transaction "to whom this
may concern etc" which could hint to
previous theory of the woman being a
prostitute
learning who you
are, learning what i
am- tells us that he
doesn't really know
this person and that
he thinks by sleeping
with her he will get
to know her more
also what i am
suggests that he
doesn't know much
about his identity-->
could have been
challenged in
previous relationship
e.g. you're a pig etc
his desire to find out the answer whilst
sleeping with her portrays him as
sinister and twisted
Don't talk to me of love. Lets talk of Paris, The little
bit of Paris in our view. Theres a crack across the
ceiling And the hotel walls are peeling And I'm in
Paris with you.
Dont--> reverted back to stanza
form which suggests he has been
rejected and that woman would
prefer to talk
crack... peeling- language of decay
symbolises his broken and negative mood.
tells us that he is a glass half empty kind
of guy--> he's in Paris city of love yet he's
impossible to please--> why the woman left
him?
crack across the ceiling- have to be
lying down/ looking up which could
suggest they are on a bed and that the
woman is finally starting to give in or
that they are actually in a sleazy hotel
and there really isn't any where else
they could sit
Don't talk to me of love. Lets talk of
Paris. I'm in Paris with the slightest
thing you do. I'm in Paris with your eyes,
your mouth, I'm in Paris with... all points
south. Am i embarrassing you? I'm in
Paris with you.
Paris- used for a metaphor of love in this stanza
Im in Paris with.. all points South--> he's being
sexual and it suggest he is pointing out his lack of
erection as his penis is facing south and that the
woman is not arousing him and thats the whole
point of her being here
am i embarrassing you? its embarrassing for her not to
arouse him, maybe could act as a hint for her to try to
arouse him to prove that she could
I'm in Paris with you
stress could be on YOU-
I'm here with you aren't I?
why question me// I'm
here with you (downplay)
so not happy he's here
with you--> resentful
stress could be on I'm-
meaning i can't believe I'm in
Paris with you
stress on Paris- how can
you question me when I've
taken you to Paris--> city of
love etc
paris- city of love and romance
you- direct address-->
could be a stranger, friend,
ex lover or maybe even a
prostitute
alternative
interpretation
maybe the theme of the poem is savour
the moment
making the most of now and not
dwelling on the past or future
repetition of I'm in Paris with you is
used to emphasise point about enjoying
the present
narrator ignores typical romantic settings
because being together is more important than
the typical romantic locations