friends grow apart. childhood is coming to an
end. represents life and importence of
grabbing chances life presents to you
'but where are those who
sought you?'
his friends have grown up
and left him while he was
not willing to grow up and
takes chances
'don't breathe. don't move. stay
dumb
advise on how to stay hidden (how to
not grow up, stay a child)
language (continued)
sibilance ('s' sounds)
'sacks, seaside, salty, shout. repeated 's'
sounds create a sound/image in the readers
head (calm & tranquil) reminder of childhood
innocence.
verbs 'prowling'
makes the children sound like they are
hunting animals, predators looking for pray.
builds tension within the poem as we don't
know whether they will find him or not
personification 'the
cold bites through your
coat'
discomfort and fear of
the narrator. builds
further tension, forced
to stay there. mirrors
discomfort of the child
who does not want to
grow up.
assonance
repitition of
vowel sounds
stumbles, mutters, scuffering. link together the
noises and actions the others make. emphasises
his anxiety as he listens