The dissapointment which heaney portrays in this poem can be linked to
growth from a child to an adult which also often involves dissapointment.
Disappointment
'Blackberry Picking' explores the dissatisfaction
often involvedin ganing the object of desire
Heaney is unveiling greed
Nature
Nature is the most obvious theme in the poem. Like
many in many of Heaney's other poems this relates
back to his own childhood, growing up on a farm in
rural Derry.
Story / Structure
The poem is divided into two parts, the firt is
notably longer and more light-hearted, the second is
much darker- describing the ruin of the berries
Stanza 2
hoard berries in bath in byre
Berries rot
Stanza 1
1st berry ripens
pots to collect berries in
Places they go to find berries
Descriptions of the berries
Senses
Sight
"at first just one glossy clot, among others,"
sound
"until the tinkiling bottom had been covered"
Touch
"red, green, hard as a knot"
Taste
"You ate the first one and its flesh was sweet"
smell
"the juice was stinkinh too"
Language
The word's are librally packed and densely
peppered with verbbs and adjectives which aid
Heaney in establishing the tone
Key points of Analysis
"Late August, given heavy rain and sun for a full week"
Sets the poem in context, evokes images og the
summer months and harvest season
"At first, just one, a glossy purple clot"
Heaney takes this ordinary thing and describes it in an
extraordinary way. The colourful imagery makes the
blackberries even more appealing
"Among others, red, green, hard as a knot"
This is a very visual description, reminding us that we are seeing
into Heaney's childhood. the discriptions of the different colours
emphasises how the children would have had to wait for the
berries to ripen- builds tension
"You ate the first one and its flesh was sweet"
Hints at the potential addictive quality of the
blackberry. Conjures images of the rich colours
and sweet taste through the use of synesthesia
"Like thickened wine: summer's blood was in it"
Simile compare the blackberry juice to wine. The notion of blood
would have appealed to a young boy who had a sense of morbid
curiosity