When filming, I decided to go in and out of focus of the Shots.
Reasons for this? The filming, I realised
that the effect of this is it could be been
as the girl looking through her eyes,
which are filled with tears.
Music
I have also made some final changes to my music when editing.
I did this because the music (both songs) I had chosen did not fit the atmosphere of the video.
Scripting
I am still deliberating on whether to add the monologue to
the video, once the whole video is created, perhaps there
will be enough narrative and drama that the opening won't need the monologue.