This portays a broken up, irregular poem - represents the relationship
- arguement and seperation
Western Theme
The poet uses words that give a western/cowboy theme - this relates to
the relationship it's a showdown - their is similes of the phones liek guns
suggesting their talk to eachother is painful - this is also shown through
imagary of pain
Alliteration
The repition of 't' sounds with 'twirl,
tounge trigger' these all emphase these
words are are harsh, quick sounds
relating to the words in their arguments
fast and painful
Punctuation
Short sentences are used "I'm all alone" - perhaps
suggesting her time alone is short or that she can only
feel her lonliness and has nothing else to say.
Allipses are used to show something happening
between "take this...and this...and this"
Ambigous - we don't know if these are shots or kisses
Intamcey
Loving and intamte words are used suggesting
closeness "in my ear"
Clash of imagary
The western theme clashes with the imagery of
mobile phones - suggests that alone the means
to argue change the arguements are still the
same