Created by katie.browell
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Rhyming Scheme - 1st Stanza, final two lines Exact rhyme 'bore,' 'before?'2nd and 3rd Stanza, final two lines slant rhyme 'grown,' 'stone - ' 'Snow - -' 'go - ' (As the speaker move closer to the 'Hour of Lead')Devices - Metaphor 'The Feet, mechanical' 'the Hour of Lead' Simile 'like Tombs - - ' 'like a stone' - causes the reader to assoicate the object being described with the simile, eg the Nerves are then associated with attending a funeral serviceAliteration - 'Formal feeling' Creates a more calm and relaxed feeling to the Formal FeelingAssonance - 'round - - Of Ground,' Slows and merges the words together, emphasizing the purposeless movement Personification 'The Nerves sit' 'The stiff Heart questions' - Parts of the body are used synecdonchally for the persons mind, each is given an individual existance and mind and feelings of its ownDashes - Slow the pace, forcing the reader to slow - emphasis the meaningless movement, lack of all feeling and then the freezing to death Mood - Calm, formal, controlled, detached, contained, stiff, Setting - Internal,Characters - Physical body parts (Nerves, Heart, Feet)Messages - After a great emotional pain the greatest feeling you will experience is the lack of all feeling, numbness, stiffnessThemes - Pain, Death of positive emotions/all feeling (simile's and analogies of death), Possible association with Religion
After great pain, a formal feeling comes - - The Nerves sit ceremonious, like Tombs - -The stiff Heart questions, was it He, that bore,And Yesterday, or Centuries before?The Feet, mechanical, go round - - Of Ground, or Air, or Ought - - A Wooden wayRegardless grown,A Quartz contentment, like a stone - - This is the Hour of Lead - - Remembered, if outlived, As Freezing persons, recollect the Snow - - First - - Chill - - Then Stupor - - then the letting go -
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The mental after effects following a great pain
Described using images associated with the body, nature and physical death
'Formal feeling' - not hysteria or violent emotional distress but a feeling of control
Possibly trying to connect its suffering with Christs on the cross
No specific persona, the person is described and identified though body parts - the Nerves, the Heart, the Feet - given an individual existence.
An analogy of Freezing to death
There is a slow gradual movement towards a numbness, stiffness, paralysis, 'The Hour of Lead' - a moment remembered even if outlived
Parts of the body are used synecdonchally for the persons mind.
Personified with a simile that suggests people are sitting at a Funeral service
Formality, stiffness, control, cold, bitter
Confusion within the Heart - how does a Heart question?
Moving aimlessly , movement without meaning/progress
Amount of pauses emphasis this lack of progression, as it slows the reader down
Paradoxical serenity that follows pain
Quartz - loss of feeling, numbness - yet a feeling of contentment comes with this lack of feeling
The effects of a great pain is no feeling at all, the absences of pain
Chill - the great painStupor - the emotional response to painletting go - the future of letting go of this painThis is also an analogy of freezing to death, suggesting that the emotional response to a great pain is equal to the pain of a slow, cold, numb death. Emphasises by the dashes, slowing down the reader and the effects of slowly freezing to death
Formal - calm, polite, controlled, no hysteria or painic
Suffered for so long it forgot
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Internal feelings,Death
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