"We stood by a pond that winter day, and the
sun was white, as though chidden of God,
and a few leaves lay on the starving sod; -
They had fallen from ash, and were gray." -S1
Winter - lack of colour, lack of
feeling. Pathetic fallacy.
Monosyllabic wording - Hardy is closing up
within himself - depressive.
'Chidden of God' - sense of
destiny, contrast from
natural imagery of sun.
The sun is usually warm and
reflects enjoyment -
contrast to traditional
imagery.
"Your eyes on me were eyes that rove over
tedious riddles of years ago; and some
words played between us to and fro on
which lost the more by our love." -S2
Communication is now a chore, not a pleasure.
Desultory
words.
'To and fro' -
indicates a
game-like
nature. Lack
of sincerity.
'years ago' - shows the relationship
has been dead for a long time.
Links to underlying theme of
death.
Emphasises an
early romance
in the
speaker's life.
rove: wander, no fixed destination.
The woman's eyes display her boredom.
The speaker no longer holds her interest
nor emotionally engages her - lovers are
normally fixated on each other.
"The smile on your mouth was the deadest
thing, alive enough to have strength to die;
and a grin of bitterness swept nearby like
an ominous bird a-wing..." -S3
Repetition of dead/die
is symbolic of the dying
relationship.
The woman's smile shows no
joy or happiness.
Contrast
to a typical
lover's
'beaming
grin'
Simile of a bird indicates her
leaving - and frequently
moving on (like migration).
The ellipsis mirrors
a bird flying away.
The speaker may be
watching -
powerless.
ominous – bringing misfortune;
a-wing – flying past
"Since then, keen lessons that love
deceives, and wrings with wrong,
have shaped to me. -S4
A lesson in love's
dissapointments.
Alliteration for
emphasis.
Rhyming pattern:
ABBA
Regularity,
repetiveness.
Title - Neutral tones: numb,
empty feelings - paints a picture
drained of confidence and colour.
Some ambiguity - other
meanings of neutral (e.g.
unbiased)
Poem is tinged with death and
darkness - a pessimistic tone exists
throughout - a lack of hope.
1867 - an early romance
(before Hardy was married).
Exploration of the transient
nature of love and its cycle.
The pain of failed
love.
lack of
stability.
"Your face, and the God-curst sun,
and a tree, and a pond edged with
grayish leaves." -S4
Description of a colourless world -
links to the title.
Break-down in rhythm - reflective, memory.
Sense of melancholy.
Throughout stanza four - repetitive 'ee'
sound.
4 tetrameter
quatrains.
Born in Dorset,
1840
Potentially
autobiographical, or
personal elements;
begins with 'we'.
Underlying theme of nature -
references to leaves, sun,
pond. May link to man
seeking refuge in nature?
Underlying theme of death, decaying -
woman's smile, the communication and
leaves - plus the relationship as a whole.
Stanzas 1-3
describe,
stanza 4
reflects.
Inconsistent rhythm
This maybe
echoes the
uncomfortable
feeling which
existed between
the two people