IELTS Writing Task 2: Opinion Essay 4 - Borrowing money from a friend

I think that borrowing money from a friend has some ❌ and can harm or damage the friendship in some cases. ❌, a person borrowed some money from his or her friend and did not return it. ❌, I believe that borrowing money from a friend and returning it on time can not harm friendship. ❌, it even can strengthen the relationships between them. ❌, which I will mention bellow, I think borrowing money from a friend and returning it do not damage the friendship.

I think that borrowing money from a person who is close to one is normal. Imagine that someone needs help and ❌ his or her friends will offer it. For example, when my friend asks me to baby-sit her child while she is taking her classes I agree because I know that she desperately needs my help in order to finish her degree and save some money. Furthermore, ❌ that she will be there for me if I need help. ❌ with the money, sometimes we borrow money from each other but we always return it to each other. I think it is very important to return money borrowed from a friend. I am glad that I can lend her some money when she needs it because I am sure that she will return it ❌.

❌, I believe that when friends lend and borrow money from each other it means that they trust each other. However, ❌ with the fact that money often can cause the end of the friendship. For example, a person, who borrowed money from his or her friend and did not return it, will try to avoid any contacts with the second person. At the same time, a person who lent the money to his or her friend and did not get it back will have more likely an unpleasant feeling about the situation too. ❌ friends will fall apart.

❌, I think that borrowing money and returning it will help to keep friends together.

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