Magazine Advert Feedback

MAGAZINE ADVERT FEEDBACK

Magazine Advert (binary/octet-stream)

FEEDBACK WE RECIEVED FROM OUR TEACHER: - The colour theme matches the entire theme that we are creating for our music video. It compliments the digipak and the neon colours present in our music video, as we have kept the two main colours running through all aspects of our products.  -The bottom of the poster has been changed to incorporate the Digipak theme as originally it was a white block and distracted from the entire image. In addition the opacity of the neon swirls have been decreased as initially it was too bright and the black font was difficult to see.  -The improvements that we can think about is changing the font as it is not the most sophisticated.   

Caption: : For the drafting process of our Magazine Adverts as a group we decided to construct more than one, this is because we have four people in our group and we thought it would allow us to create more ideas and ultimately form the best poster for our music video and media product. 

MAGAZINE ADVERT FEEDBACK

Magazine Advert 2 (binary/octet-stream)

FEEDBACK WE RECIEVED FROM OUR TEACHER: Similarly to the previous Magazine Advert the colour theme relates to the entire package of our media product. The pictures at the bottom especially compliment the neon theme as they feel in line with the rest of the product.  Improvements we have recieved: - The font also needs to be changed as it is too small and difficult to read.  - The artist is too far away in this shot and doesn't relate to the codes and conventions of the star image.  -