Zusammenfassung der Ressource
"We Real Cool" by Gwendolyn Brooks
- Breakdown of the poem:
- The Pool Players.
Seven at the Golden
Shovel.
- We real cool. We
Left school. We
- Lurk late. We
Strike straight. We
- Sing sin. We
Thin gin. We
- Jazz June. We
Die soon.
- ‘Jazz June’ is not meant to be taken with a
sexual connotation. Brooks has said it’s a
reference to the youths going against the
authority/government/etc. See video.
- Stanza 4
- Their lives are a joyful expression of sin and
rebellion. ‘Thin gin’ could refer to just their
heavy drinking habit or might imply their
lack of wealth. They can only afford thin gin
and not any better liquor.
- Stanza 3
- They stay around places late at night,
especially the pool hall. They don’t have
anywhere else they need to be.
- Stanza 2
- It is implied that part of the coolness of
the pool players is due to their dropout
status.
- Stanza 1
- Subtitle; description of the scene.
- Gwendolyn Brooks, b.1917 d. 2000
- She was born in Topeka, Kansas; moved
to Chicago when she was young.
- She began publishing poems in
newspapers at the age of 13.
- She was the first African American author
to win the Pulitzer Prize (Poetry; 1950).
- She was the first African American woman to
serve as poetry consultant for the Library of
Congress.
- She was once the poet laureate for the
state of Illinois.
- She described her poetic style as “folksy
narrative,” but she dabbled in many
different forms.
- Her later poetry (i.e., from 1960 onwards)
heavily focused on the Civil Rights
Movement, politics, and the African
American experience.
- Author Background
- Background of the Poem
- Published in Brooks' 3rd volume of poetry, titled "The Bean
Eaters" (1960); although, it was written in 1959.
- Lauded as one of the greatest examples of "jazz poetry".
- Brooks was inspired to write the poem after seeing a pool
hall full of young boys after she was walking in her Chicago
neighborhood.
- She tried to embody the views they had about themselves
and their takes on life in general through the poem.
- The “we” at the end of every line, according to Brooks, is meant
to be recited “softly and swiftly” to convey the questioning tone
of the boys.
- Here is a recording of Brooks reciting "We Real Cool" with
a small explanation in the beginning (well worth the
watch).
- Analysis of the Poem
- Structure
- 4 stanzas (+
subtitle)
- 2 rhyming
lines per
stanza
- Very simple; the
structure of the
poem reflects Brooks'
focus on rhythm and
meter.
- When read aloud,
each line* has 1 soft
beat (the word "we")
and 2 hard beats (ex.
"Left school", "Sing
sin".
- *lines 2 & 8 are
exceptions
- Perspective
- This poem is written
from the perspective of
the Pool Players
mentioned at the
beginning in the subtitle.
- Brooks also gives a
location for this poem:
The Golden Shovel
(presumably the name
of the pool hall).
- Pool halls were
considered by some
in the 50s & 60s to
be "bad places"
where the "bad
kids" hung out.
- Poetic Devices
- Syntax
- The syntax, or
grammar, of this
poem uses African
American Vernacular
English (AAVE).
- This is a recognized
dialect that has
been developed in
African American
communities
throughout the
United States.
- “We real cool” omits the
verb (are) that is used in
Standard English.
- The result is a musical
quality to the poem.
- Rhythm
- 3-beat rhythm; 1 soft
beat, 2 hard.
- The three-beat
rhythm is reinforced
by the nonstandard
grammar used in this
poem.
- James D. Sullivan
describes a feeling of
energy and
aggressiveness from
this rhythm.
- Alliteration
- Brooks uses an
alliterative pattern
to emphasize the
strong beats in the
poem.
- “Strike straight”
- “Sing sin”
- “Lurk late”
- Themes of "We Real Cool"
- Rebellion
- Brooks stated
that the pool
players’
rebellious actions
are a fight
against the
establishment.
- Everything that the
characters do is an act
of defiance against
what is expected of
them.
- Youth
- The pool
players
described are
all young
enough to be
recent
dropouts.
- This entire
poem sums up
the whole of
their lives; they
inevitably will
die soon due to
their reckless,
youthful
carelessness.
- Their youth is fleeting, but
if they do ‘die soon’ then it
will be eternal.
- Uncertainty
- Brooks describes these pool
players as not really having a
well-defined sense of who they
are; however, they do have
some awareness of their own
importance.
- They are very boastful and
prideful, despite their uncertainty
in life.