Zusammenfassung der Ressource
Carol Ann Duffy - Wintering
- Intro
- about relationship
plagued with arguments
- Purpose: question
love and its meanings
- Creates sympathy for speaker by
metaphors of nature and seasons
- sense of never ending damaging
cyclical path of relationship
- highlighted by poem split into three parts
- Imagery
- connote death and darkness
- through this, shows relationship is in
cycle of repeated emotional breakdown
- "slow funerals have ploughed the rain"
- "funerals"
- mourning
and ending
- "plough" - sow
new seeds, new
life. contrasts
imagery of death
- "I wear a shroud of cold"
- "shroud" reminds
readers of death
and corpses
- "grey fades to black"
- things have got worse
- "grey" - gloomy days, motif of
nature creating cyclical structure
- "black" - night
- Start of poem
heavy focus on
negativity
- Undermining romantic symbols
- "the stars begin their lies"
- "stars" - wishes/hope/romantic
- undermined by "begin their lies"
- "Night clenches in its fist the moon, a stone."
- verb "clenches" and noun "fist"
violent connotations; anger
- "moon" romantic, undermined by
being a "stone", cold and hard.
- "Dawn mocks me with a gibberish of birds"
- "dawn" - fresh start but shows
hasn't happened as mocking
- birdsong usually pleasant but described as "gibberish"
- Form
- in each tercet, middle line
shorter, and contains one clause
- "has wept its leaves",
"all my mistakes",
"the sky is flayed"
- creates sudden and striking caesurae,
representing how relationship is broken
- Alternatively emphasises isolation as couple
not in contact with each other (writer
holding "small stiff body of my phone")
- Split into three parts
- First focuses
on raw conflict
- Second on tension
and nervousness
- third on resolution
- Conclusion
- end of poem shows how argument has been resolved
- reader told of a "hidden
freight" which "shifts" the
dynamic of attitude of writer
- past tense "what has been" juxtaposed with future,
"what will be", emphasising how it is in the past
- final stanza filled with sibilant sounds, and words with
closed vowel sounds, emphasising how fight is over
- words from start of poem contrasted with words from end
- "grey" - "green"
"rain" - "light"
- "love to pain" from pain to love as "winter thaws and melts"
- paralleling relationship to seasons through lexical choices
- half rhyme ("lies" with "lose") when relationship broken, full rhyme ("this" with "kiss") when harmonious