Edexcel English Language and Literature: A Streetcar Named Desire. This mindmap includes how to structure your Streetcar response, although it isn't written in stone; you can manipulate it however you like as long as you fulfil the criteria.
These are often good to compare-
Stanley's monosyllabic elliptical
sentences and Blanche's elaborate
multi-clausal sentences
If you're totally unsure on how to
describe the quote you're using, state
the sentence mood- e.g. 'declarative'-
rather than just 'sentence'
Turn taking/ length of turn
Upwards/ downwards convergence/ divergence
Note the lack of accommodation on Blanche and Stanley's part
Represents the conflict between the Old South and New America
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Analysis and evaluative comments
While you are given an extract to consider,
you should also look for examples
throughout the play- look for nuances and
subtleties that you can comment on, such
as symbols and motifs
Ensure that you look at alternate readings of a quote
Some quotes will have different
connotations to a contemporary
audience compared to an audience
at the time
Some quotes hold a
certain ambiguity- they
could be interpreted in
multiple ways, so
comment on this
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Context
Play/ theatricality
Remember to acknowledge that
Streetcar is a *play*, not a novel-
it doesn't have chapters, it has
scenes; characters are seen and
heard, so consider costume,
symbols and sounds.
Click the paperclip for mind maps on theatricality ^
The Civil War, the Second World War, and women's rights all
play a role in this work, amongst other factors, so be sure to
acknowledge their influence
Things to remember
Make sure you use context 'consistently'
Every paragraph needs to have contextual information that is relevant to your point
Don't just add any old context at the end of your paragraphs
e.g. Williams presents Stanley's soldier
mentality as a form of entrapment.
Also, Williams had a sister called Rose.
For this example, a better piece of context would be
a link to the influence of WW2, which occurred just 2
years prior to the play
Make it relevant to your point and integrate it into your response
The introduction
Present your argument linked to the steer
When you first read the
question, consider
synonyms for your stee
E.g. male dominance- superiority,
control, power, authority, command
Place the extract in context
What has just happened?
This could be in the previous
scenes, or literally just
before the extract
Suggest Williams' possible
intentions or messages within
the extract
Add some contextual information,
however try to save the good stuff for
your paragraph
The paragraphs
1. Topic sentence
Include a sentence which references your argument linked to the steer
2. Evidence from extract
Bring in evidence from the extract- don't be
quick to dismiss the resource they've
provided, they provided it for a reason!
3. Link to other parts of the play
Include a link to another part of the play, preferably in a different scene
The examiners want to see your knowledge of the play,
and that won't happen if you only mention one scene
4. Context
Include *relevant* contextual information in every paragraph, be it
biographical, historical, situational, political or cultural
The mark scheme mentions consistency with
context, so be consistent with it! Integrate
throughout your paragraphs, ensuring its
relevance and that it aids your argument
5. Purpose/ message
Consider why Williams would include this moment
in the play, and why he uses the language he does
6. Return to the question steer
Always link back to the question steer to highlight
that you have in fact been discussing it, especially
if you have an obscure or subtle argument