We have decided that
this shot needs to be
refilmed for our next
draft because there are
christmas decorations
outside which do not fit
with our storyline or
genre.
Lips
Compared to the previous shot in
the opening this shots lighting is far
too bright, this means that the
overall flow of the opening is off.
We considered refilming this shot
however I think that our solution is
to take the shot out all together as
we do not think that it fits well
anyway.
Doll
We have decided to take
this shot out because
eventhough it has quite a
sinister effect it is not
porcelain so we do not think
that it fits well with our
themes.
Walking
This shot needs to be refilmed to
ensure continuity in our opening as
some shots go from dark to light
and also because the shot is too
dark to see the action.
Cutting off Crusts
The speed of this shot does
not fit with the opening. Also,
it seems to be a long shot that
is quite unnecessary so we
have decided to take this shot
out of our opening.
Eyes
These 2 shots do not
transition well into each
other due to poor angles. We
have not yet come to the
conclusion if we want to
refilm this shot or take it out.
Due to this we think we will
refilm the shot and decide
when editing whether to
keep the new shot in.