married to fellow
poet John Agard also
from Guyana
moved to the Uk
at 27
key themes throughout her
poems: west indian folklore,
cultural displacement, elements
and nature and diversity and
embracing it.
Structure and Form
poem is about the
influence of her Mother
Praise Song--> African American
song created to celebrate the life of
someone. Can serve as a Eulogy
first three stanzas are very
organised and similar in the
way they appear and the
amount of syllables
the final section marks a break
in the staircase pattern and
signifies falling off the edge into
adulthood without the presence of
her mother
Verse 1
You were
water to me
deep bold and
fathoming
you were- past
tense suggests
that her mother s
either dead or that
she's grown away
from her mother
and the influence
of her is gone-->
broken relationship
deep- serious thinker/
physical depth/ strong
and dark (colour)
bold- brave, un-fearing,
not sure, over baring, not
necessarily good thing.
fathoming- fathom is a
measure of depth,
fathom is to understand
the meaning of
something--> suggests
her mother was hard to
understand or that she
always tries to work
every one out.
Verse 2
You were
moon's eye to
me pull and
grained and
mantling
moon's eye
always
watching
from above
moon goddess--> represents
guidance and symbolises
moon + tides
sacred in African
American myths
pull-attract something, move
something, injury or gravitational
pull which suggests her mum has
such an influence on her and that
her mum has her own pull
You were sunrise to me
rise and warm and
streaming
sunrise- every day, needs to happen
rise- wake up/ move upwards/ to get a
rise out of someone is to make them
angry--> her mother makes her angry?
warm- suggests she is
temperate (has anger)
warm--> get closer to,
grow to like
streaming- flowing, continual
flow, constant outpouring-->
suggests her mother is constantly
talking
Verse 4
You were the fishes red gill to me the flame
tree's spread to me the crab's leg/the fried
plantain smell replenishing replenishing Go
to your wide futures, you said
fishes- no apostrophe for
possession--> she doesn't feel
like she belongs to her mother
red gill- gill is needed so a fish
can breathe but a gill goes red
when the fish is out of water
and their breathing has
stopped--> maybe she's
suffocating, out of water, out of
place --> maybe why she moved
to England
flame tree- native
caribbean tree that is red.
Flame- anger, burnt. Tree-
shelter--> sheltered
existence and stifled
childhood
spread to me- you've passed your anger/
family tree onto me so she's moved to
england to get away from it all
crabs leg- crabs can only move sideways
but she wants to move forwards so she
leaves for the Uk where she can
fried plantain smell- plantain is a large banana but
refers also to slave plantations so maybe her mother
always brings up the slave trade and past but Grace just
wants to forget it so she moves to england where her
mum doesn't want her to be.
replenishing replenishing- huge gap suggests the distance between
her and her mother, stairway destroyed and reference to her leaving
for the UK
go to your wide futures, you said-
lack of a full stop suggests the
relationship is unresolved
wide- her mother thinks her dreams are too big and
delusional so she's dismissive, bitter and aggressive