Tells a story of her childhood friend, only at the
end do we realise he is imaginary. When the
narrators mother discovers this Brendon dies
Poem is partly autobiographical,
the location and the details of the
father describes Jackie's own life
Structure and Language
Form and structure
It is an elegy which is a sad poem
written on the death of someone, is it
the death of Brendon or for the idea
of him or for a lost childhood
The poem is regular in form with 5 stanzas and
five lines. So the lines are approximately the same
length with similar numbers of syllables. At the end
the final 2 stanzas are shorter which reflects the
death of Brendon Gallacher
There seems to be a lot of repetition
with Brendon Gallacher's name
which gives it a sense of unity
She uses the possessive pronoun e.g. 'my Brendon Gallacher
which emphasises the theme of loss when his name just
appears 'Oh Brendon' the impact of his death is greater
Sound
Dialect words are in
the poem to indicate
a Scottish accent
Imagery
Brendon is associated with life
outdoors, the only time he comes
indoors is when he dies suggesting
that the fantasy of him doesn't mix with
the reality of her life
Brendon is a exotic glamorous figure removed from
the dullness of the narrator's life, his Irish rather than
Scottish and his father is a cat burglar, not just a thief
Jackie uses pathetic fallacy
e.g. the rain that was pouring
could reflect tears
We only have a physical description of
Brendon at the end, gives more impacts to
his death and makes him seem real
Attitudes, themes and ideas
The poem contrasts fantasy and
reality to create a sense of escapism