1. The greatest invention that has made the
biggest impact in my life is the cell phone.
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2. One reason why my cell phone is the best invention
for my lifestyle is because it allows to talk to anyone
anywhere.
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3. Another reason why my cell phone is so useful in
my life is because I can text people instead of calling
them when I do not feel like talking on the phone.
4. Lastly, one of the handiest tools on my cell phone is
the Global Positioning System which helps me not get
lost in unfamiliar areas.
5. The cell phone has been the most influential
invention in my life.
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