Revision 1

Most people do not even notice acronyms and initialisms, becoming part of our daily language.

Having become part of our daily language, acronyms and initialisms are not even noticed by most people.

Becoming part of our daily language, acronyms and initialisms are not even noticed by most people.

Most people becoming part of our daily language, do not even notice acronyms and initialisms.

ZIP stands for Zone Improvement Plan, something that everyone who knows they need a zip code does not know.

Sending a letter, every does not know that ZIP is an acronym for Zone Improvement Plan, but everyone must have a zip code.

To send a letter, everyone must have a zip code, but not everyone knows that ZIP stands for Zone Improvement Plan.

Everyone must have a zip code, but not everyone knows that, to send a letter, ZIP stands for Zone Improvement Plan.

Sentence An to A.

Change accept to except.

Change it is to they are.

Make no change.

Delete sentence 3.

Move sentence 9 to after sentence 11.

Delete sentence 16

Move sentence 13 to after sentence 15.

Change ancient to Ancient.

Change find to found.

Change stood to stand.

Make no change.

Change from to of.

Add a comma after title.

Change the comma to and.

Make no change.

Remove the comma after Laser.

Change is to would be.

Change meant to means.

Make no change.

Add a comma after "ram".

Change Internet to internet.

Add a semicolon after initialisms.

Make no change.